There's quite a good, strong start. I also really liked 0:55-1:24. I really loved the guitar or whatever sound that came out around the 1:24 and was jazzing it up until it disappeared a few seconds later. I wished there had been more of it. It was a pretty good sound and fit the piece well.
I think the drop at 1:36 was fine if you were going to end it at 1:44. You instead continued the song for an extra like 10 seconds. I think that might have been better as a drop into another minute worth. That's what it felt like it was going towards and then it just decided to end, but it's fine as closing the song out I suppose. 0:35-0:45 is kind of my least favorite part. I think the bass holds for too long. Especially around the 0:43-0:44 mark, but that could just be me.
Overall I think it has a lot of potential. Keep up the good work.